2024 June Entries

Topic: Photo Journalism Judge: Subrata Bysack

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BASIC LEVEL ENTRIES

: 1st – 7.0 – A better POV could increase the impact of the image, decrease the contrast to bring out more details in the dark portion.

: 2nd – 5.0 – Activity of the people at work is not clear, the stick touching the head of the worker in the middle and half cut body of the worker at the right looks odd. Need bigger size image to understand the technical quality

: 4.5 – Need technical improvement and a better interactive environment

: 4.0 – Incorrect focus point, it is visually disturbing to see more than half of the image is covered with unfocused tree trank and an unfocussed ball, the image lacks the ambience of the incident

ADVANCED LEVEL ENTRIES

: 1st – 7.0 – The black head of the girl at the right is at prominent position which is disturbing the entry visibility of the image, swapping the girl at the left with that at the right will improve the presentation of the image.

: 2nd – 6.2 – The image is tight cropped, the subject needs more breathing space

: 5.8 – More visibility of the hand and the horse mouth is needed to make the image more expressive, need to lower down the POV which will also reduce distortion of the hand

: 5.0 – There is lack of coordination between the hand holding the map and the profile face of the person at the left

MASTER LEVEL ENTRIES

: 1st – 8.0 – Better exposure could bring out the emotion of the image more effectively

: 2nd – 7.0 – Too cropped, need to capture more of the truck and the cars with fire to bring out the feel of the incident.

: A little more contrast will improve the technical part of the image

: HM – 7.2 – The players at the right and left need more clearance from the border of the frame

: 6.4 – capturing the posture and the the expression of the demonstrator could have enhanced the story telling of the image

: 6.0 – Better POV could have avoided too much back of the boy with more of his side profile and facial expression. This would have made the story more strong

: 6.0 – Burning of the highlight at the face and hat disturbing the emotion and the visual impact of the image

: 5.2 – Include more of the background to understand the environment, it will make the story better and interactive.

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